Volunteers wanted

May 24th, 2015 at 1:07:16 PM permalink
Nareed
Member since: Oct 24, 2012
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I've managed to write about half of "Ours," a short story. This translates as of today to about 8,000 words, about 21 pages in Word in my PC. I'm looking for volunteers to read it and give me their opinion of it.

Anyone interested please PM me your email address and I'll send you the Word file
If Trump where half as smart as he thinks he is, he'd be twice as smart as he really is.
May 24th, 2015 at 1:32:29 PM permalink
Evenbob
Member since: Oct 24, 2012
Threads: 105
Posts: 10168
PM it to me and I'll give you an
honest opinion. I've done it for
people before and I can be fairly
good at spotting good from bad.
If you take a risk, you may lose. If you never take a risk, you will always lose.
May 24th, 2015 at 2:35:08 PM permalink
Fleastiff
Member since: Oct 27, 2012
Threads: 47
Posts: 3963
Quote: Nareed
I've managed to write about half of a short story, about 21 pages.
Any more and its a Novella, not a short story.

Good luck with it.