Does this make sense to you?

June 27th, 2013 at 1:42:36 PM permalink
Nareed
Member since: Oct 24, 2012
Threads: 346
Posts: 12545
The scene is a man and a woman in a small, bare room which actually functions as a prison cell. The woman, Lya, is awaiting to be charged, perhaps with a serious crime. The man, D'eryn, is of course fully aware of this.

Ok, so far? Good. D'eryn has come to visit Lya to help her keep her spirits up, but also to find out whether she wants him.

Does this make sense to you?
Donald Trump is a one-term LOSER
June 27th, 2013 at 4:57:04 PM permalink
DJTeddyBear
Member since: Oct 24, 2012
Threads: 5
Posts: 265
I assume there's something about those unusual names that's the key to this, but I don't get it, so, no, it doesn't make sense to me.
Ignorance is bliss and knowledge is power. But having only some facts can get you into trouble!
June 28th, 2013 at 2:54:43 AM permalink
odiousgambit
Member since: Oct 28, 2012
Threads: 154
Posts: 5104
makes sense as far as plot
I'm Still Standing, Yeah, Yeah, Yeah [it's an old guy chant for me]
July 14th, 2013 at 6:43:17 PM permalink
AcesAndEights
Member since: Oct 24, 2012
Threads: 6
Posts: 351
Quote: Nareed
The scene is a man and a woman in a small, bare room which actually functions as a prison cell. The woman, Lya, is awaiting to be charged, perhaps with a serious crime. The man, D'eryn, is of course fully aware of this.

Ok, so far? Good. D'eryn has come to visit Lya to help her keep her spirits up, but also to find out whether she wants him.

Does this make sense to you?

What happens next?
"You think I'm joking." -EvenBob
July 14th, 2013 at 7:50:38 PM permalink
Nareed
Member since: Oct 24, 2012
Threads: 346
Posts: 12545
Quote: AcesAndEights
What happens next?


That would be telling ;)

Ultimately a government falls, a planet gains independence and D'eryn and Lya...
Donald Trump is a one-term LOSER
July 14th, 2013 at 10:27:17 PM permalink
AcesAndEights
Member since: Oct 24, 2012
Threads: 6
Posts: 351
Quote: Nareed
That would be telling ;)

I am not a number, I am a free man!
"You think I'm joking." -EvenBob
July 15th, 2013 at 6:37:37 AM permalink
Nareed
Member since: Oct 24, 2012
Threads: 346
Posts: 12545
Quote: AcesAndEights
I am not a number, I am a free man!


That sounds like something out of the Twilight Zone. But then just about everything does.

Actually right there and then, Lya doesn't want him.

Oh, TZ, one of my favortie episodes, thought I don't much care for this quote "Yes, for the love of God I will let you out." Or words to that effect.
Donald Trump is a one-term LOSER
July 15th, 2013 at 9:28:47 AM permalink
AcesAndEights
Member since: Oct 24, 2012
Threads: 6
Posts: 351
Quote: Nareed
That sounds like something out of the Twilight Zone. But then just about everything does.

Actually right there and then, Lya doesn't want him.

Oh, TZ, one of my favortie episodes, thought I don't much care for this quote "Yes, for the love of God I will let you out." Or words to that effect.

I actually thought your "that would be telling" was a quip from The Prisoner, one of my favorite classic TV shows. It appears we were not on the same page.
"You think I'm joking." -EvenBob
July 15th, 2013 at 9:33:25 AM permalink
Nareed
Member since: Oct 24, 2012
Threads: 346
Posts: 12545
Quote: AcesAndEights
I actually thought your "that would be telling" was a quip from The Prisoner, one of my favorite classic TV shows. It appears we were not on the same page.


I'd never heard of it.

I did get the bit "That would be telling" from somewhere, but I've no idea where that was.
Donald Trump is a one-term LOSER